http://ericae.learnerblogs.org Just another Learnerblogs.org weblog Tue, 02 Dec 2008 05:13:15 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.5 http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/11/anc-questions-for-monday-december-112006/#comment-7 Ms. Fink Sun, 17 Dec 2006 23:15:44 +0000 http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/11/anc-questions-for-monday-december-112006/#comment-7 I like the way you describe Mary Lou's feeling about Beth Ann's new behavior. I think, though, that there is more you could say about how Mary Lou reacted to Mr. Furtz's death. I like the way you describe Mary Lou’s feeling about Beth Ann’s new behavior. I think, though, that there is more you could say about how Mary Lou reacted to Mr. Furtz’s death.

]]> http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/15/ancsummarizer-121506/#comment-6 Ms. Fink Sun, 17 Dec 2006 23:13:45 +0000 http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/15/ancsummarizer-121506/#comment-6 Good! You have a beginning, a middle and an end and it all flowed smoothly! Good! You have a beginning, a middle and an end and it all flowed smoothly!

]]> http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-summarizer-12106/#comment-5 tania Mon, 04 Dec 2006 16:24:31 +0000 http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-summarizer-12106/#comment-5 you summerized the story well by including the main ponits about marylou and her cousin coming over for the summer.I think you should have included the way that carl ray looked and the way he acts. you summerized the story well by including the main ponits about
marylou and her cousin coming over for the summer.I think you
should have included the way that carl ray looked and the way he
acts.

]]> http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-summarizer-12106/#comment-4 Ms. Fink Sat, 02 Dec 2006 14:32:41 +0000 http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/01/anc-summarizer-12106/#comment-4 Your ideas summarize what you read pretty well, but some of your facts are wrong. Mary Lou didn't tell the family that Carl Ray is coming to stay - Mr. Finney did. There are some other details that you could have included - Mary Lou's best friend and the boy she likes - those are important parts. You need to watch spelling and how you type - you have extra spaces between words. Your ideas summarize what you read pretty well, but some of your facts are wrong. Mary Lou didn’t tell the family that Carl Ray is coming to stay - Mr. Finney did. There are some other details that you could have included - Mary Lou’s best friend and the boy she likes - those are important parts. You need to watch spelling and how you type - you have extra spaces between words.

]]> http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/10/17/october-16-questions/#comment-3 shanique Tue, 17 Oct 2006 17:57:54 +0000 http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/10/17/october-16-questions/#comment-3 hi,your blog looks exactly like mine but i like your questions because you wrote them in complete sentences.:) hi,your blog looks exactly like mine but i like your questions
because you wrote them in complete sentences.:)

]]> http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/10/17/october-16-questions/#comment-2 michelledi Tue, 17 Oct 2006 15:45:22 +0000 http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/10/17/october-16-questions/#comment-2 I agree, but remember to add that it's an All County Boys Soccer team. Michelle I agree, but remember to add that it’s an All County Boys Soccer
team.
Michelle

]]> http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/08/29/hello-world/#comment-1 Mr WordPress Tue, 29 Aug 2006 15:25:26 +0000 http://ericae.learnerblogs.org/2006/08/29/hello-world/#comment-1 Hi, this is a comment.<br />To delete a comment, just log in, and view the posts' comments, there you will have the option to edit or delete them. Hi, this is a comment.
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